WaterLily and Maple

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I decided that I liked the ‘grungy’ waterlilies so I made another one tonite. This is a waterlily shot that did not make the cut to post but worked with the struggling maple tree shot from Golden Gate park.

I found Carl Root’s photography on Photo.net. I really like his work particularly the rhythms portfolio. You can view the work here.

Golden Gate Park

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Today, had a full photo day. First, I went up in the city to catchup with Aaron and Kevin. I had met them during a print class at San Francisco Art Institute this summer. While hurrying back to my car, I made a quick grab shot. I was rushing because I was overtime in my parking space and wanted to avoid a ticket. Then, I rushed back across the bay to the photo center for my re-done slides (converted from digital). This time the slides look really good. Finally, I went to PhotoCentral to meet with the photographer’s critique group. A good day but this was a weekend without any photo adventures.

Orchid Bridge – Take II

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This is a rework of an earlier image. I was happy with the result but not thrilled. This afternoon, I visited for the first time a group of photographer who meet once a month to review each other’s work. I decided to show this image. One man, Monte Hartman, did a critique and thought this was ‘almost, but not quite’. After a discussion, there was consensus that the lightness in the lower right corner was drawing the eye out of the image. I re-worked a little to darken that area and make the bridge on the right-half stronger. I think this works better. Another suggestion was to mirror the orchid buds and try that as a composite. I kept a layered version but cannot decipher my compositing process enough to redo. Hmmm. Memory is fleeting.

Turns out that Monte has been teaching a composition course for 30 years and has an amazing eye for compositioin. I am taking the class starting on February 9th.